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REVIEW: “The Machinist” / “The Inquisitor” by Gryvon

ABOUT:

The Machinist

In a nightmare world where the things in the dark are large and hungry and humanity has been driven back to the tribal and savage, a man like Avery Belfour is an asset. Avery is a machinist, one of the few left with the knowledge to keep mechanical devices—in particular, guns—in working order. But being in such high demand comes with a price: Avery is kept as a prisoner under lock and key.

When a rival colony raids the compound Avery is kept in and breaks him out, Avery has a brief hope that his incarceration is over. But it turns out that his saviors have just as much need for his services and are just as unlikely to give him the chance to say no. He is dragged away to meet the dark and deadly Harrow, the leader of this new colony. Harrow is a hard man, made so by his circumstances, but Avery wants his freedom, and is willing to do anything to secure it.

(Originally part of the Weight of a Gun anthology.)

The Inquisitor

Continuing in the world of The Machinist, Avery Belfour and his captor/lover Lord Harrow now face the threat of The Inquisitor. But Harrow is very possessive of his prize and has no intention of turning Avery over without a fight..

(Originally part of the Weight of a Gun II anthology.)

REVIEWS:

The Machinist

Ummmm…I have mixed feelings on this one…

Part of my brain thinks: my, my, my! Adrenaline and dark erotic fantasy! Dubiously consensual, absolutely insane, and definitely not safe. The story is good, opening straight on the action, fast-paced, leaving it up to you to catch up and snatch flying details of a dystopian world where Avery’s fate seems to be freed only to run for his life and jump out of the frying pan into the fire all over again. Think cell. Towers. Gunshots. Rain. Glowing eyes. Gunshots. Mud. Claws. Corridors. Blood. Screams. Gunshots…The writing is clipped, with a few repetitions that show  the drawback of using short sentences – you quickly run out of synonyms for the subject – but it’s overall tense and quite efficient in the action scenes, if not powerful.

The story pauses for breath one brief moment and shifts, and that’s where the other part of my brain chimes in and says “meh”. I’ll grant you that dub-con is not my top favourite kink, and that it needs some work to get me all worked up, but the awaited scene left me cold. The mood swing is not convincing, the sex scene covers very basic feelings and sensations only;  I fear that this is the limitation of a predominantly descriptive and minimalist writing style that would need to expand a bit to suggest and evoke.

Still, a fair part of the story was rather enjoyable, and I am intrigued by the dystopian world, albeit a little wary. On to “The Inquisitor” then, and perhaps I’ll be able to decide if I like it or not.

Note : Katinka will review  the “Weight of a Gun” anthology on March 6th 2014. Mark your agenda!

RATING:  3 STARS

BOOK INFO:

15745976Title: The Machinist
Author: Gryvon
Publisher: Storm Moon Press
Pages: 22 pages
Release Date: July 20th 2012
Purchase Links: Storm Moon Press, ARe, Amazon

The Inquisitor

As far as I am concerned, the story died at the 50% mark. A new one raised from its ashes with a brand new shape, and I am still wondering what happened to the first one and its characters.

I enjoyed the action in the first half, but had the same reservations I had for “The Machinist” regarding the writing. The author aims at covering more ground, at taking us farther into the dystopian world, at giving more insights on the characters and showing development in the relationship; but the story is not coherently built, and the characterization is superficial. As a result, the whole is inconsistent and frustrating.

I wanted to, but there is no doubt that I didn’t like it.

RATING:  2 STARS

OTHER OPINIONS :

 Ami : 3.75 stars

BOOK INFO:

images (1)Title: The Inquisitor
Author: Gryvon
Publisher: Storm Moon Press
Pages: 27 pages
Release Date: December 13th, 2013
Purchase Links: Storm Moon Press, ARe, Amazon

 

2 comments on “REVIEW: “The Machinist” / “The Inquisitor” by Gryvon

  1. shelley
    February 22, 2014

    Great review Ilhem. I felt mostly the same about the Maschinist. I loved the exciting lead up with it’s fast action pace and then I sort of detached from the consensual dub-con scene …

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    • ilhem3606
      February 22, 2014

      The author’s got something good with the dystopian world and its possibilities, but the characters’ interactions are really a weak point. I liked that Harrow remained mysterious, it could have added some thrill to the fantasy; but sexual activity with a gun is not gun kink.

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