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REVIEW: “Dance of Stone” by Jay Lewis Taylor


Late twelfth-century England: a country of divided loyalties while the Lionheart is on crusade. Hugh de Barham, master mason at Wells, walks a dangerous path between Glastonbury and Wells as the two vie for supremacy, a path made more dangerous still by the fact that Hugh, if he could, would share his bed not with women but with men.

The only way to stay safe is to keep his head down, but building the church of his dreams is no way to do that: and then there is Arnaut l’Occitan. What does this stranger from Provence want with Hugh? And can he, or anyone, be trusted?


“Dance of Stone” is an acquired taste and my experience a mixed bag of feelings. I took some enjoyment from it even though it took me half the book to get there, I concede that the writing is elegant and the knowledge impressive, but I am not convinced by the execution, partly because of my reading tastes that incline towards something more intense, partly because of its limitations as far as characterization is concerned.

The story covers almost ten years of a master mason’s life and work throughout England, between the late 11th and the early 12th centuries. The author obviously knows her subject; she treats the reader to a wealth of details about The Age of Cathedrals, the art, the medieval way of life and day-to-day routine, from clothing and food to housing accommodations and travelling, from a different feel of time to a different feel of closeness and distance. It should have been captivating, but the lack of excitement had me pawing the ground with impatience and all the time in the world to be picky.

The first part especially is studious, the lesson in history a little bit too obvious, the whole a little bit too dull for my liking as nothing ever makes waves even when drama strikes. Niggles of a bored mind, perhaps. However, while there’s no denying that knowledge and a solid historical setting are essential and admirable, that the details are indeed interesting, they are not enough to make a captivating story telling. As a matter of fact, my niggles would have remained trifles if I’d had a good grip on the main character, whose fears and joys, nightmares and dreams, all in all whose feelings and emotions are what the story is about beyond the events that affect his life.  Instead, they’re the weak spot when the author resorts to a recurring inner voice that conveniently explains or describes said emotions. I am  not crazy at all about the inner subtitles; they’re awkward and flat, and they pinpoint exactly where the writing is falling short of the mark, which would be to give consistance.

Thankfully,  something gave in for the second part – my impatience or the author’s world building. I don’t know what exactly to be honest, but it felt like the prose let go of its studiousness to be more lively, and I grew interested enough to care about the story lines that had been there all along to enjoy :

Hugh de Barham  dedicates his life to building something immovable, yet he is submitted to the whims of princes and games of power, and is forced to lead a wandering life when all he wants is to put down roots. He builds churches. He works and masters stones, crafts edifices and makes them rise toward Heaven,  yet believes that his immortal soul is condemned to Hell, and is terrified by the impending fall.

“Stop me”, Hugh said. “Stop me falling off the world”

“Dance of Stone” is first and foremost a dive into the world of medieval craftsmen. The story takes more after a historical novel with gay characters than after an m/m romance in period costumes, which is noteworthy, and should please historical fans. Readers who  favour elegance and delicacy in their stories should also enjoy it as long as they don’t mind the romance burning slowly in  the back seat. If you’re a sucker for intense, character-driven stories, you might want to pass.




Title: Dance of Stone21813296
Author: Jay Lewis Taylor

Publisher: Manifold Press
Pages: 352 pages
Release Date: May 1st 2014
Purchase Links: Manifold Press

6 comments on “REVIEW: “Dance of Stone” by Jay Lewis Taylor

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  2. gaycrow
    June 12, 2014

    I enjoyed reading your very well written review.

    I wasn’t sure what to expect when I started reading “Dance of Stone” (I don’t think I’d read your review at that stage), so had an open mind.

    Turned out that I found the story to be one that I liked a good deal. The history side of things was fascinating, although sometimes hard to understand and accept, by today’s standards.

    I can see that it might not be to everyone’s tastes, though, especially those who prefer fast, pacier novels. This story’s more of a slow burner, but I found it hard to put down, and was immersed right to the very end.


    • ilhem3606
      June 13, 2014

      I’m glad you enjoyed the review and the book. It’s interesting to have your opinion, thanks for adding it! :)

      Yes, it’s slow paced, but I found it rather fitting a different feel of time. It’s also very smooth and low-key, and that, added to the feeling that the story served the historical and not the other way around, didn’t work for me.

      I enjoyed the second part a lot more though, and I can totally see why you couldn’t put it down. What did you like best? Which details did you find hard to accept? I don’t recall anything disturbing….. Oh, wait! It’s Hugh’s angel, right?!


      • gaycrow
        June 13, 2014

        Hi! Nice to chat.

        Hmm, what did I like best? The interaction between Hugh and Finn, which was frustratingly slow, but won out in the end, was a plus. Hugh’s capitulation seemed a little contrived; I would’ve liked the author to have shown Hugh being attracted to Finn a little more and a little earlier, but Hugh’s obsession with Godric got in the way there.

        I liked the flow of the story, and the description of everyday life as it was then, such as the way Godric’s mother made the garden, and what she cooked.

        What I found disturbing was the political gamesmanship of the clergy. Religious hanky-panky is one of my bugbears, and I hated all of that in this story.


        • ilhem3606
          June 14, 2014

          Ah yes. So much ambition and so little respect for human lives.

          About Hugh and Finn. On the one hand, I liked that the relationship development showed how much communication and closeness was different, and on the other hand, I would have loved to feel more emotions from Hugh. But I’m repeating myself…

          I liked that it showed a side of medieval society we are less used to read about in romance novels. Knights are most glamorous, I guess. :)

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